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July 20, 2006 ando14

okay my story is about a sister and brother Marissa and Bailey they soon  find out that there dad is dieing of a bad disease not only that he’s really close to Marissa.  marissa mum and dad have been married for 6 and a half years. when her dad simon gets sick her mum Linda can’t take it anymore.So Linda breaks it to him ” i wont a divorce” they had to break it too the kids marissa took it really bad. she wished it was a dream but it wasn’t a dream it was real no matter how much marissa tried to tell her mum it was a bad idea linda still wouldn’t change her mind. At the moment marissa hated her mum for every thing so in the end her mum finds a new boyfriend and he hates the kids and wonts to send them to boarding school.  

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  • 1. goddess14  |  July 21, 2006 at 12:02 am

    its good lisa
    but you should have put what happens in the end
    your going great
    love you
    millie
    xxxxx

  • 2. schnookiputtzi  |  July 21, 2006 at 12:02 am

    Koolies, keep it up

  • 3. schnookiputtzi  |  October 2, 2006 at 4:22 am

    hiiiiiiiiiiiiii! ur so awesome!!!!! he he!

  • 4. jarra  |  October 12, 2006 at 6:08 pm

    hi lisa great sounding story


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